Yus, me.
RIGHT HERE WE GO:
The beggining: The intro was quite stiff, I think you could have worked that to make it slightly smoother (TIP: When getting stiff, press C to relax all and start from there).
The middle: Getting a bit better, the second DM was stiff (use the technique above that I advised), but other than that, good job.
The end: Last DM was pretty sexy, actually, you could have broken off your hand and skeeted I think, though.