Hello, i am new to this community and was recommended to post here because i like art, and i wanna sometime get into "texturizing".

these pictures coming up were posters for my little sisters design a poster contest which won.

the first one was the first try, then the second one was remade because the parents wanted it to be simpler.







the one with the ants were supposed to be for the kids name and jersey number.

comments plz.

I definetly like the second one better, yet still i dont like the design. Seems to amature and unclean for my own personal style, Should try bring some style into it. Think about where your positioning things more carefully so it gets a nice "flow" to it. For a first 6/10