i made this but can someone make it into a madness so i can see if i can copy it and get better at bashin

Well, no. People don't make madmans for you, they make their own. Look at some other replays dude. It's a good start, I saw about 5 places where you could get another dismember in, but people aren't gonna do the work for you.

On the other hand I'm glad to see new players who may be a bit inexperienced, asking for help becuase they are new. There is nothing wrong with that. I commend you for your bravery in asking for tips and pointers to help get you started, coming out of the closet, so to speak.

are these any good?

Here's the cons and pros:

brenton my first major breakage: The dm was obviously very low and the style was a bit stiff, I saw many oppurtunities to wallop uke in the face........

Brenton spin kick: It's okay, still a bit stiff, you need to work a little bit on fluidity and timing. Remember, you can always go back and edit it.

Brenton leg: Sorry to say, but a bit n00bish. I also saw some glitchy stuff in there, same with the spin kick as well.


But don't fret, you're pretty good for a first timer, keep at it and I'm sure you'll be teh pwnster in no time.

thanks toritori

Yeah editing it is key man. My new Fire-Mist wushu/madman hybrid/fusion (lol) started out with one break and I was all D: But then I got a buttload more because I edited. go back and open the replay. When it starts, hit "P" and then play through frame by frame with Shift+P. When you want to start editing, hit "E". Play the match through to the end and you can save the new result.