Endurance Onslaught 6.0
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[Wip] Robo set
alright this is going to be my first well done set please give me advice as i go along

Head[50%]
Last edited by LulzMaster; Jul 31, 2010 at 03:21 AM.
Good:
Nice start, still looks like this should be in the 25-35% stage, but nice start, still needs shading and depth and all that other stuff, good start though.

Bad:
The only thing I really have a problem with is the mapping with this sonic sensor thingy's, make them more oval like in the flat so that they could come out more circular.

overall: for a start 8/10
for actual head now 5/10
I bought a subscription to Wibbles so I think this quote is necessary,
"Be careful when gazing into the void, for it gazes back"
need's more detail's on the part above the eyes, instead oh having it blank you could make it like falling apart and you can see the inside like wires, plates, curcit boards awsome stuff like that cant wait to see more.
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i'll show you a very simple example of what depth is.
With Depth
Without Depth

See the difference? depth is basically making something pop out without using a shadow or whhatever.
I bought a subscription to Wibbles so I think this quote is necessary,
"Be careful when gazing into the void, for it gazes back"
dude the one really bad thing is that the scracthes are mirrored

if some one had a mole on their face it would look weired to have one the exsacly same place on the outher side of the face

btw add some shadows and a dimond of somthink on that curfe on the back

btw its got a nice struture

for the sturture 8/10

rest 0/10
Originally Posted by B0BAH View Post
dude the one really bad thing is that the scracthes are mirrored
if some one had a mole on their face it would look weired to have one the exsacly same place on the outher side of the face

OMG i didn't mirror it lol guess it came out that way =/ but ill fix it