3rd update

this is my first card,
C/C please

dunno why but those letters just poke my eyes
i kinda like that black and white style,but letters are wrong ._.

Indeed,i dont have any fonts that looks like old

i like the card but the font u used.. i dont really like it..its hars to read text... image is great and the USA flag bg is also great
text doesnt have to be old style font, "old style" card but the text should be normal.. and i would also put a box where the text is... something like this:

http://www.google.se/images?hl=sv&bi...=&oq=&gs_rfai=

found much better examples here for the background flag.

Also; Yeeeaah...no. Re-try. This lacks layout. You don't have a proper place for the text, no proper easy to read colors. Nothing is good.

But don't worry. You'll get there someday Go forth and re-do.

Reduce opacity of text by 10%, make the image of tori blend to the card.
7/10 so far.

u should change the tori pic

hmm...i like it...what program did u use to make it luc?

i like it
but about the font.. is pretty good and the tori is not suitable to be american....
the tori is a robot so the backround must be light or electricity, anyway keep it up!
7/10