It wasn't bad, you need to learn to relax, you looked liked you held all, the entire time... and your pose wasn't even a touch good, try standing up right, on 2 feet and don't tri pod, it makes a horrible pose, unless you make it something cool, like sitting, or headstand pose, but when your in a extend this joint and that joint, sorta ruins the replay.
I'd give it 5/10 i liked the dm's but too holdy