Made this for a request. Then the requester was banned. So What do you think of it, and what is it worth? I know it's simple, but I like it. C&C Please

It's pretty good. 5/10. It's to simple. Add more detail and color. Other than that, it's ok.

Omg. It's not head D: sorry for being rude, but it's piece of ... with a seam. Sorry.
Would you even tried. It's not head.

I added some more color. Also, Hackduck, It's not supposed to have a face. It's supposed to be strange.

I like the second one more, but there's something at the back of the head

the little line, you mean? Yeah, I think that's just for the spinny.

if it appears in the head, you have to fix it

It's too weird, what it should be. This is my opinion.
P.S.
Take away the seam back.