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Boredpayne's unfortunately long road to ORMO
Okay, time for me to make one of these threads so I can get better at replay making.

The ones definitely worth looking at are red boys can't dance and freerunningskillz, which you'll need freecam to view.
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red boys can dance.rpl (283.4 KB, 36 views)
falcon paunch.rpl (88.1 KB, 29 views)
demolition.rpl (85.3 KB, 24 views)
eh.rpl (76.6 KB, 17 views)
Boredpayne - Armstaff.rpl (217.7 KB, 21 views)
freerunskillz.rpl (396.3 KB, 23 views)
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Hey look more than two lines.
Boredpayne's unfortunately necessary bump.

Why am I talking in third person anyways?
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somemanip.rpl (93.9 KB, 23 views)
Last edited by Boredpayne; Jan 25, 2011 at 05:11 AM.
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Hey look more than two lines.
88 views.

No comments. Bumped down to page two.

This replay community is just so great and gives such helpful and important criticism.

Updated versions of demolition and red boys can't dance.

Also fisting and a new replay.
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red boys can dance.rpl (418.1 KB, 16 views)
ppppunch.rpl (115.3 KB, 24 views)
demolition.rpl (112.3 KB, 21 views)
Last edited by Boredpayne; Jan 28, 2011 at 03:11 AM.
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Hey look more than two lines.
1. Nothing special, you keep bumping into Uke, and it is not realistic. 2/10.

2. The punch was cool, but the kick was weird. 7.5/10.

3. Sick replay. The flow was off, but the first kick was good, and the knee was just super! 3 dm's, and your knee didn't break. 8.5/10

Tip - You should put your name in your replays, like for me, I do Co1 - [name of replay].
Red boys can dance- Was not that nice of a replay maybe if you got more then a Hand dm and a better pose.

falcon punch- In boom hits most people do not like it when you grab. It would have been better with out no grab. If you were to hit it in the right place I am sure you would had a three dm punch.

Demolition- The thing that makes a good replay is flow and a pose. Every hit should be a Dm. When you bump and what not makes it look really bad.
The three dms with the knee was nice though.

Eh- All I have to say about this one is that I should have been -30 gravity I think that it did not look good when after you made the throw you were 20 feet in the air. I also think that you should have had a pose.


Armstaff- I did not like that as much as others because you bumped in the beginning and that killed it for me.

Freerunningskillz- By far the best the only thing that I did not like was that little pose you had at the beginning.

Some maniop-I think that you kicked uke two far up and was took to long to get over there. When you do that I think that you should have lifted uke closer to get the kick dm or punch dm faster.