Here's more sketches that needs to be criticized. Rain effects for the win.





And here's a 60's Chevy Camaro



Updates:
I liek Wars


Kardel Sharpeye in his younger years

awesome !! u r really talented

well pretty messy for my taste,and u should try another kind of paper,just fix that and ur lines.
7.5/10

Personally I love that meesy style
The rain effects are good, imo, but at some places proportions could be better.
8/10

i love this draws and i love the style how u done
well done mate 8/10

Messy lines? That's my art style. Thanks for all the comments and all that.

Update can be seen on first post. Added a war theme and Kardel Sharpeye from Dota.

Try a pencil, those lines looks pretty messy and kinda ruined the whole thing.

I loved all,
the only thing i see you can modify is that the first pic (the gun one) has to many lines. To many base lines that you didnt delete

one thing: get a better cam

no other critics from me, cause i already told u that it looks nice ^^

quite awesome. did you use a pen to draw it? 8/10.