I made this some minutes ago.
Feel free to use it.

Proportions.

Look at the size of the feet in-game compared to the hands, then look at your proportions of them.
Look at the width of the shin in-game compared to the knee joint.
Look at the size of your hands compared to the head.

Proportions.

Yep
Proportions
Size of some parts are screwed up but other than that its a nice though many things could be improved.
This old tori i made could help a bit with toris size n stuff.
Oh he doesnt have neck ;p

Oh well. Thanks i will improve at my next picture Its something like my second pixel work.

Thanks i will improve next time now i will work on Hampa Like set (New One)

Yeah most of the size is screwed, maby fix it? Also its really plain, maby add in a colour to the background of the tori.

Nah its ok i may try a pixeled tori again later this was just a test what would happen if i do pixelate an tori. well as i see not a very good work xD also you can add colors what ever you wish it is free for everyone.

I agree with zinx,also it needs a neck.

I edit this:

Yeah thts good
But how t design the texures to this xd
*666th post :o*

copy the image and make your textures xD