mmkay so. the head.
this gewd ? he looks french no
my problem is the hat on the left side..to solid. dunno what to add.
we can say this was a colab beetween me and Aitor21

i like the head in generaly nice hair but i dislike the mouth and remove the text it looks ugly 8.5/10

hey post that i did the head, and that you added the mustache and the hat.... shemen!

added to first post.
hey i just wanted a secodn oppinion :3

well the hair should be the same as the mustache but it isnt and the hair doesnt have shading nor does anything have shading
3/10

utotally mad
but i need more constructive critics, not just flaw pointers. something i can use has a guide line

constructive critic, huh?

Make the mouth smaller and let it smile, evil.
Make the hat bigger and remove the text.
The eyes aren't round, try to fix that.
Remove this orange thing under the mouth.
And I would like cartoon hair at the head.

Was this constructive enough? :3

he cant really fix anything.... its my head and he added things ontop of it...
i really didnt want to make them round eyes...
ive attempted something similar to what he has done with the head....

the original one is...

(both done by me)