Toribash
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[TEX]roboticator.
Hi, I make a new set for a request, here the wip of the head :



C&C, Thanks.
Last edited by GraphtiC; Mar 31, 2011 at 05:15 PM.
[Coffee]is the best clan
very nice idea
7/10
it will look more better if you make the edges more cleaner and make the eyes and above ears part more glowing
Too similar to pate5's tutorial.
same goes for the one in your avatar.
come up with your own ideas.

3/10
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
Too similar to pate5's tutorial.
same goes for the one in your avatar.
come up with your own ideas.

3/10

Same goes for a lot of head lately.
Sad ):
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
I'm an artist.
yeah I board not many ideas to improve my head.
I remove the stuff he had on unrated.
Better?
[Coffee]is the best clan
Those new plates you made on sides look sweet.
That greenis/blueish place on sides could use some darker shades on em.
It would give this head even better 3dish feeling.
Also back is waaaay too plain.
Last edited by Jodarok; Mar 31, 2011 at 06:42 PM.
It's All About Expansion
It's not a bad head but all of those heads you make look similar to each other, try to avoid that and use some variation instead of the same shapes over and over again.
This style is kinda overused,try thinking of something crazy and then draw it.Or you can inspire from other TB-ers,of course just inspire,not steal their work =)
I play games and lift weights.
Pate's Tut's are a god place to start but as BenD said, you have to get some fresh ideas.
Some of the shading is off as well, try to shade from the top down.
Not bad.
I like the style this head is in. (All though the originality of it is questionable.)
But there are a couple of flaws I noticed.

-The two "plates" closing in on the face need to be much smaller. (It doesn't fir the theme the way you used it.)
-The eyes should be a little more unique. (It looks like the robot is cross-eyed [pupils].)
-The curves on the plates on the back of the head should be smoother.
-You should also try making all your work different, and not like the next person.
4/10
BAD LUCK