Not much so far
Played with gradients a lot though
C&C would make me happy

Edit: also I tried to make the camera smoother. Did it get any better?

Pretty nice. Snyc seemed to fit and song choice was good. You need more transitions and more replays. Really nice though. I do see that you have gotten better at making this stuff. Great job. 8/10
Looking forward to new ones!

Great effects and excellent freecamming. The song was cool, and essentially all that RICKMO118 said.

nice vid so far.
but I think the first replay is a little fast

9/10

i like the vid
nice replays
nice effects
transition was ok
but i think that sometimes you got the cam to close to the toris...
9/10
<3 rise against <3