both are nice
the first one was great, not as pwnzorleetidge as others think, but still great. I brefer non-numerical coolness to numerical amount of DM's. that was a bit slow for my taste, and unflowy, sorry. still, it was great, 8.5/10
for the second one, it was only up to OK. since you did remake it, you could have fixed it's main weakness: it's too stiff