^ this is my vid ^

The scanline-part from 0:00 to 1:41 hurts my eyes.
Basically all the scanline-parts.

I'm not sure about the music choice. Its hard to synch, but you did what you could.

The capturing is really good I think. I like the zoom in, zoom out parts.

7/10

that is sick are u in sin with largekilla and do u think u can teach me parkour aka free running please

Fixed the link for you.

Well, the scanlines are kind of terrible, but the replays are nice, the camerawork was great, and the song choice was decent (but definitely could've been better).
Overall, I'd give it a 6.5/10.

Oh, and does anyone know the mod from 0:35-0:45?

ultimatefreerunning I believe.
Barely any sync, horrible song choice, and the tv effect was bad. You need to keep it to a minimum, it's like playing a fighting game and spamming one button ;o
The replays were okay for the most part, but I liked the variety of mods. The intro was too long, and you should've cut some of the beginning off. Freecam was also bad, and it zoomed into people's legs for no reason and zoomed out, you're just making us miss part of them. Transitions, which there are none, are bad. I've seen one good one, which is only a shader transition, I don't even recommend using the shaders you used, just think. The people want to focus on the toris, so use a shader (preferably bright) that lightens up your tori. It's easy to do especially with RT, since the surfaces reflect the toris.

Sorry, didn't like it at all.
3/10

Whats the mod from 2:00 to 2:10?

@iRookie rk_buildingf.tbm
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btw thx for comments guys.

Scanlines are horrible, and i'm not so sure about the music choice either, because doesn't really seem have good beat to sync anything with, as AHD said.
Bad choices of shaders, but i kinda liked the camerawork, but make it clearer, it was too zoomed in.
Keep it up anyway.

i enjoyed the video alot

some replays kinda sucked compared to the rest.

some mods were quite interesting

i've never seen them lol

can you tell me which mods were used? (except ultimate_freerunning i know that one :P)