Toribash
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replays
here are some of my replays rate comment etc
i would like critiscm to help me out on my replays thnx
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goodenuff.rpl (77.3 KB, 8 views)
kretdecap.rpl (38.2 KB, 5 views)
kretdecap2.rpl (41.1 KB, 5 views)
kretdecap3.rpl (46.6 KB, 5 views)
kretinGdamn.rpl (54.5 KB, 6 views)
Bitches dont know bout my omnom
Rapid Eye Movement i also do head and leg textures
goodenuff : well you seemed quite relaxed at first but you became very stiff through the replay. And there were alot of more joints you could've dismembered. 5/10

kretdecap : very stiff, especially at the end. The arm dismemberment wasn't very realistic but I liked the decap. The pose didn't realy catch my attention. 5.5/10

kretdecap2 : The decap was nice. I liked it. But again, you were very stiff at the end, you might wanna try doing a pose with only 2 feet on the ground, not more. 6.5/10
kretdecap3 : the decap wasn't realy realistic in my opinion. And you could've tried to pose at the end. 4/10

kretinGdamn : not bad at all. But you might wanna continue on dismembering uke, he was right next to you. A bit stiff but not like the other replays. 5.5/10

Looks like you're new in replay making. I suggest watching other replays of other players, especially ORMO replays (you'll find those in the organizations board). Those will give you inspiration. And remember, practise makes perfect.
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