Here you can see the first version and the final version.
The final version isn't the reference picture. (Just the neck cause I just made the head.)
Feel free to post som C&C.
First version:
Final version: (yeah this one is a totally remake)

pretty nice work so far but the eyes could be more glowy

Oke, I don't need help anymore, I'm satisfied with it.
Btw. won't draw the body..to lazy though.

Can you post the previous edition so that we can compare and see the improvements?

They were ugly ;_;

I like it but the mouth shadow thing should be lighter then that it just looks like a smiley face.
Also make the tan face armor like in the reference picture. :]

Ok, I added the first version and the final version.