I like what you were trying to do, just didn't seem executed right imo. I'm guessing you used C4D to make the text? The back shadow is off, a lot. That might be intentional but I thought you were trying to make it look like Some letters were infront of eachother. The back one is the only one with the shadow messed up though, it's not lined up correctly. If you used C4D, chose a different angle for it. Then bring it into Photoshop / Gimp. The lens flare is a little too much, if you need a lens flare pack, I have one. They have some that are a lot better then that.
Overall 6.5/10