Okay, I'm going to give you some CnC here.
First of all, I would recommend on changing your speed on your replays. It seems like it takes about 500-1000 frames to get to your first DM.
Next, realism. I would try to relax your joints more, and try to keep your momentum up. You will probably need to practice that.
Finally, style. I would try to be more stylish than just flailing on the ground like that. You know what I mean?
Just a few suggestions to create better replays for you. Hope you try them.