yo gus this is my frist madman respond reply rate comment i dont relly care enjoy

This isn't a madman bro, sorry.
A madman is when you DM AT LEAST 5 parts.
This was three, so yeah. Try editing a bit nd then see what you get!

ok my bad i didnt rellly no wat a madman was but this i thiught was good nso thxs for the tip

Yeah, it was alright, but not a madman I'm saying. You should try to add more flow and boom hits!

pretty good maybe a little more fluency would be nice 7/10