Got better from when I made my last replay thread, figured I'd give it another shot.

CnC is highly appreciated.

2/10 i dont think i saw you move your ankles 1 time, you were in a very awkward pose at the beggining,grab dm on the arm and the head, you kicked the arm but dms with your thigh. And you're on stilts

Work on fluidity and take your time with replays
2/10

Hum... no, that kind of replay doesn't deserve that rating.

Anyways, the opener was a little strange, however the first kick was enjoyable to me. The second kick was a little strange, and the decap was a grab.
However, I really like that style and the pose was great

7/10

I edited that part and made something else out of it.

No grab DM's, but there are grabs.

This isn't the best, but it's the beginning of more to come.

At any rate, I'm working on another realism replay, because this one isn't amazing at all.

The first spin was nice, but after that it was akward and the pose isn't that good....
6,2/10

I recommend you use the starter again but without taking the second step, you changed direction and used your torso alot in mid air, the pose was not realistic, dont toe jump,
it looks bad when your lower body spin but your upper body stays put in mid air.
www.club540.com to find real tricks and tutorials on how to do them

I'm not going to rate your replays till I see you progress more

New replay.

I loave it!!!! I LOAVE IT!!! Lol. It's very realistic. 9.99/10

New replay. This took me four hours to complete, and I'm very proud of it.

I might edit it further.