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[TEX] Cartoon Head
Hi i made this head cause i want to wear it. (i still didnt wear it yet)
and i need to see if its good. Please give me constructive critisism.

P.S: I made the WHOLE thing. Well of course i got the background from the internet but that doesnt matter. ( theres a glitch on the feet )

I dont like it at all, no shadows, no gradients, not even realistic hair. You need to add textures in the hair, preferably in the teeth, and thicken the lines a bit.
0/10 you're not even trying. You're using paint? please close and never open again
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I dont like it sorry.. i dont like the head, no shadow, and look simple..
so, -1/10 i think , u must more learn about application to make head..
Paint is best too.. Paint is not Weird.. :3
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Originally Posted by zotwi View Post
0/10 you're not even trying. You're using paint? please close and never open again

who are to judge
look at your own art http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=187778
all it is is filter spam and Comic Sans....
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Anyways Charbel first thing is dont use Paint to make heads unless you're some type of pixel artist I suggest downloaded Gimp which is a free program art

Also in Paint I suggest using the Curve lines to make eyes I would judge the hair aswell but Idk what the back looks like

Also dont listen to the people saying "this sucks" or "this is horrible"
Everyone starts somewhere
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Originally Posted by sa13 View Post
Terrible...

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=140740

Originally Posted by Bonjovies View Post
its good if you can shade it

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=140740

Originally Posted by keoni109 View Post
I dont like it at all, no shadows, no gradients, not even realistic hair. You need to add textures in the hair, preferably in the teeth, and thicken the lines a bit.

Closest thing to CnC on the thread.

Originally Posted by zotwi View Post
0/10 you're not even trying. You're using paint? please close and never open again

Especially you :|
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=140740

Originally Posted by UzumakiR View Post
I dont like it sorry.. i dont like the head, no shadow, and look simple..
so, -1/10 i think , u must more learn about application to make head..
Paint is best too.. Paint is not Weird.. :3

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=140740


Okay so, your head:

Well first off, it's pretty decent for using paint. It lacks proper mapping. Hair is a bit high, face is weird, etc.. Since it's made in paint, it's going to be pixelated unless you anti-alias everything by hand.

I suggest downloading GIMP here: http://www.gimp.org/
It's a much more powerful tool for doing anything like this.
After you get that, download the GIMP color palette so you can use the colors from Toribash more easily with no guesswork. That is found here:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=188624

Since you're just starting, I recommend using Vox's texture templates for mapping out the head. You can find them here :
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=277222
Or you can use these templates:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?p=2992245

You can check the tutorial section for any texturing tutorials, though when I started using GIMP I just looked at random tutorials so I could get the gist of how the tools worked.

Good luck, and remember that you won't be good right away. It takes practice and patience.

Edit: Feel free to PM me if you have any questions.
Last edited by LWafflez; Dec 25, 2011 at 09:54 PM.