The opener is extremely slow which kills the replay from the start, you bring it back to life with the booms but grabbing so much is annoying.Lastly you should always pose before you end the game the majority of replay makers pose standing but others do poses like yours until they learn to stand and balance.Please take my C&c and use it on your next replays.
P.s I would like for you to give me C&c on my replay that I'm about to post that I just finished while giving you C&c.