Toribash
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Tay's Maybe permanent replay thread
Hey my first replay in quite some time C&c please :]


This first replay was inspired my Swex.
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The opener looks bad.
The walking is way too stiff, and the second kick to the lumbar did not look very good.
The kick to the glute looks wierd, it is way to weak to break it, but it looks ok.
The rest is pointless, but the pose was good.
Overall, it was a little stiff and there were some parts where you rubbed yourself on some of Uke's parts.
Needs more destruction.

5.5/10
oh yeah
Sup, well the opener was alright till you messed up on the run, didn't like the grab DM, the other dm's were decent but not a fan of single dm's though, there was somewhat flow in there but keep practicing and you'll improve. 6/10
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