The opener looks bad.
The walking is way too stiff, and the second kick to the lumbar did not look very good.
The kick to the glute looks wierd, it is way to weak to break it, but it looks ok.
The rest is pointless, but the pose was good.
Overall, it was a little stiff and there were some parts where you rubbed yourself on some of Uke's parts.
Needs more destruction.
5.5/10