i see you're rather new to toribash community, first of all: Welcome =)
as i can see you are not that skilled, that's because you just started, you have to pay your attention on your flow, momentum is the base of a good replay and so a good dismemberment. Use more relax, it gives you a bit more realism on your movements (that doesn't mean that holding joints isn't good). Toribash is all about being creative. imagine every move you want to make, and slowly turn the "dream" into reality. try to spend more time doing your replays, this gives you more chances to get something better, also remember that every time you have a movement you like, save the replay, you don't want to know how it feels to missclick and lose it all.
you have a road to go with your replays. i'd give this one a 3/10.