Well then!
Lacks depth no resting place for eyes, boring colors - too red, weird yellow...glow? on the bottom middle, too much of the signature is solid black, Only one render - render feels lonley in the weird glowin shit, needs something to feel at home. colors of the render are thrown away - instead you try and invent a new palette - red...
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck