I have Wip of a set.
I letting this here for Comments and Critiques.

Need to do the hair and the fur

drawing work is much better
cheek bones still need work, but it really is much improved
but
the first thing i thought of when i saw it, purely because of that shape and your insistance of doing a jaw line the way you do was this:

stewie with goku hair

give a good example of cheek

the drawing work is way better, the shading too, shape is pretty weird and mapping is also weird but it's looking okay

you should put the eyes closer together

it is meant to be this way.

It is better this way, Believe me

cheekbones protrude somewhat, creating a bump, rather than a smooth surface as you're drawing it.
red is the shape
blue is the shading line/direction
green is the random crease that should be there because of his smile/smirk

very general and rough sketch, but you can see what i mean well enough
correcting it will make the jaw and face look more separate, like they should be, looks very much like the jaw and skull are one piece atm

also noticed he has a very angry looking brow section, but its not carried through to the eyes, angry eyebrows, amused eyes and mouth

the eyebrows are fixed.
and so the cheek bones.

Edit:

eyes were wide, I edited

I need to make the fur
Edit:
Skin texture addition:

I donДt know what else to add.
the first project is finished