you forgot something but i added it for you, no probs.

lol aim bot
anyway onto the video
It was pretty nice, Transitions werent to flashy
and the BEEP noise it made eveery 3 seconds annoyed the hell out of me D:

but overall 7/10

and how is that Aimbot?
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yea the beep noises wasen't that good but it was better than nothing but I could made em sounds not as much but it went as it went

Good style. Miss Terminator's song and some sounds to make it more real.

I would add other sound effects just coundl't find any.

Why did you add a 3d mesh of the CoD4 Marine Sniper model in? That just looks completely out of place.

The beep was annoying, but that's been touched on already. Typically, loud, abrupt noises get annoying after a while, but it's solved by keeping it quieter.

Clips didn't look like blatant hacks this time around, so that's a plus. You should keep non-action times to a minimum if the clip is only a minute or so.

The artificial UI you added in looks a little out of place because it's significantly clearer than the game footage. In this case, lower quality might have made it blend in a little more. Concept is overdone too, but you executed it fairly well.

The red border just looks odd for the color scheme you used for everything else. A light blue would of been safer, and fit more with BF3's color scheme.


Overall, it was bearable to watch. There's definitely ways to improve, but the final product was by no means bad. A little above average would be my opinion.

7.5/10

Thanks for all the feed back, I will make a new one with all of the comment you made and hope fully it will be better, So if you play bf3 your self or know any good play that could help me get clips or such that would be great.

The peeps were kinda anoying.
I liked the idea but it was kinda boring to watch.
Needs more action and more effects.
And why the hell did a Cod4 character appear in BF3?

Because I was to lazy to model a battlefield 3 charchter I did just get that one because I wanted to know how it did look.