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[Music] WIP - Phoenix
Okay, let's start by me telling you all the things I know I need to fix.
-Fruity Blood Overdrive was a fncking mistake and made the dribble bass sound like shet.
-Make drums a bit louder.
-Still working on transitions
-This is just the drop and so on, I'm still working on the intro and stuff.
Anything other than that is up to you.
http://soundcloud.com/squeakywafflez/phoenix-wip
-Fruity Blood Overdrive was a fncking mistake and made the dribble bass sound like shet.
-Make drums a bit louder.
-Still working on transitions
-This is just the drop and so on, I'm still working on the intro and stuff.
Anything other than that is up to you.
http://soundcloud.com/squeakywafflez/phoenix-wip
Wot.
listen to more music
learn a bit of the theory
i think i lasted about 10 seconds into it befor i closed it...
went back to it and listened to most of it, skipping through large pieces because your sections are too long and repetative.
what on earth made you start with the build up and the drop?
and i got less whomp whomp than "wiwiwiwiwiwi" its like you took inspiration from a mosquito and turned it into dubstep, SO annoying
so yeah, less emphasis on learning the program, more on learning music.
listen to more music, look at how songs are laid out. you can worry about getting technical and developing a style when youve learned the basics
learn a bit of the theory
i think i lasted about 10 seconds into it befor i closed it...
went back to it and listened to most of it, skipping through large pieces because your sections are too long and repetative.
what on earth made you start with the build up and the drop?
and i got less whomp whomp than "wiwiwiwiwiwi" its like you took inspiration from a mosquito and turned it into dubstep, SO annoying
so yeah, less emphasis on learning the program, more on learning music.
listen to more music, look at how songs are laid out. you can worry about getting technical and developing a style when youve learned the basics
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
I am working on the whomp whomp, I just needed to get the beat down first.
I started with the build up because I hadn't finished the intro (If you've read the first post)
And yeah, I'm still working on learning music theory, and studying songs. It's pretty difficult.
This is a heavy WIP and is not nearly finished. Thanks for the feedback, though.
I started with the build up because I hadn't finished the intro (If you've read the first post)
And yeah, I'm still working on learning music theory, and studying songs. It's pretty difficult.
This is a heavy WIP and is not nearly finished. Thanks for the feedback, though.
Wot.
I like it. I sure couldn't do it. Nice job.
