the song had good potential for a change in speed and flow in the replays, but they just kept a constant speed, kinda a let down
sync and speed ups/slowmos often felt forced, it needs to feel more natural
the smoke effects where too intense, softer and smaller, its like there was explosions going on. also didnt make sense with that city atmosphere script
are you recording at 30 or 60 fps? feels sluggish and slow when you record at 60, something to do with the program rendering at 30 fps or something. i seem to remember saying something like that recently.
otherwise it was ok, solid but not amazing, did the basics right, but the frills and bells and whistles were a let down