Endurance Onslaught 6.0
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[Art] Cartoon female :3

Updatooooo


Someone I know requested it :3
C&C plox, rate and all
Please leave a comment with what I can improve on and no useless posts xD
Last edited by Katsudon; Jul 24, 2012 at 12:24 AM.
Hi.
She's beautiful )o)

Well the shading is great. But the eyebrows look kind of awkward. I think they can use a bit more black in them. Just a wee bit, so you can tell it matches her hair.

The hair could be a bit more fabulous, but that's just me.

8/10. You're a wonderful artist \o/
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the goblin
Thanks man :3
I didn't notice that I forgot to darken the brows xD
The hair will get changed, I'll update this after a while :3
Thanks :3
If any of you peeps wonder what "Na Young" is, that's her name :3
She iz Korean :3
Hi.
Originally Posted by LLDN View Post
beauty but you should put him more sexy, you know with bigger breasts
8,5/10


Him?!? Lol.
But I do think it's a pretty good art piece, the eyes could use some work though.
Also the mouth is a little messed up, at the right side of her mouth it splits if you close up, if that's fixed I will give you a 9/10
More of these please.
Last edited by dank; Jul 24, 2012 at 01:16 AM.
dreamy suicide act
You guys have good eyes :3
I'll fix these after I get back from school,
and Thank you :3
This picture has no breasts O.o
Hi.
Found another thing, the right nose's shadow should be softened, it looks like it's bleeding.
Edit: are her ears behind her hair?
dreamy suicide act
so put some sexy breasts

~user infracted
shitposting
Last edited by BenDover; Jul 24, 2012 at 09:56 AM.
vai taca
What is it with you and breasts? It's saddening.

Also, I agree with Cerro, the left side of her lip (it's on the right in our view) could use some work.

Well as I said before she's beautiful, but what she's missing is color, true color. All this has is a pretty face and hair. I know you want to base it off of a person in real life, but I recommend adding a few bright colors (maybe a hairpin or a little colorful accessory on the glasses).
beware
the goblin