CnC my replay and get a cookie k go!
Hope you enjoy this replay.
Damn no one CnC... So free cookie right now!

Now CnC or I'l eat that cookie!

Good.
The flow is a bit messy and the dm at the end was a bit disappointing.
But I liked it.

8/10.

You mean the skeet at the end?
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Nice replay
I like it... but although the hand has not done much

9/10

May I ask why there is 31 views and only 2 Comments?

lol ok, i don't like it so much :/ 7,5/10

Erm...
I needCnC bro.
What I can improve to make it better?
Or maybe give me an example to learn from that.

well, I'm no better at replaymaking than you are, but the style is too loose.I'd say try to make every dismemberment and hit artistic and natural, but keep the tori's flexibility and "ragdoll" to a minimum.

8/10 \/

On the opener you leaned too far back, didn't look good.
The first dm looks sloppy and unaimed.
the second kick looked great.
I can't help but think that you could have punched the legs
rather than kick.
The pose looked good.

C&C me, please? I'll follow your thread if you follow mine. Link is in my signature.

I'll point out what I disliked/what you should work on:
- Clichщ opener. You could at least put some new twist on how you got into that position.
- Floppy abs and lumbar
- Derpy arms around frame 300
- Derpy arms again around frame 200
- The skeet should have more power behind it, even if you aren't going for a DM. Make it look painful.

Some good things, though:
- Your dismembers are generally clean.
- You aren't way too stiff. Sometimes, a bit too relaxed.
- No wasted hits.
- Few wasted movements.

Just work on having smooth, crisp movements, and try to have everything flow together. Your replays will look a lot better once you work on those.