pretty nice to watch, thought the effects took alot away from the replays and didnt match up with the music.
camera work was ok, was nice to get the motion and angles, but lacked direction/purpose, it felt rough
i get the same thing as sly, with the "in memory of" comment
I loved that last shader, the shadows and lighting on it make the toris look so soft.
your use of text is still horrible though, lol, but your use of colour has improved
overall, nice, less effects and text, more patience with the camera