for a cartoon style,
it is pretty good,
I see outlines of everything,
the blue part is supposed to be metal, ity is plain right now.
Choose the light direction as top,
I can see highlights coming from left.
Show an in game picture, so i can see th neck.
the jaw should have a higher contrast showing the mouth form
and its middle should not split.
it was a good sketch,
continue.
it is pretty good,
I see outlines of everything,
the blue part is supposed to be metal, ity is plain right now.
Choose the light direction as top,
I can see highlights coming from left.
Show an in game picture, so i can see th neck.
the jaw should have a higher contrast showing the mouth form
and its middle should not split.
it was a good sketch,
continue.
Originally Posted by dengue
for a cartoon style,
it is pretty good,
I see outlines of everything,
the blue part is supposed to be metal, ity is plain right now.
Choose the light direction as top,
I can see highlights coming from left.
Show an in game picture, so i can see th neck.
the jaw should have a higher contrast showing the mouth form
and its middle should not split.
it was a good sketch,
continue.
Wear it on uke and look.
It must being splitted cuz it's armor.
I can't and i srsly won't add or remove something cuz i'm rly bored. I need criticism for my heads in the future. Also, about mouth contrast... It's ok. It must be like leatheror smthng like that. It MUST looks like mask. I made contrast at lower jaw cuz i wanted make it like bone jaw.
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