Toribash
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[Art]Anime First Try



Tools:GImp and Google For Sketch

C-n-C Tell Me What I Can Do To Be Better

I Also Accept Request BUT You Must Provide Me With A Sketch And Or Colors Preferred
Did you just color a sketch off the internet? If so it's not impressive at all, in fact it's quite lazy. You also need to provide the original sketch to credit the original artist who did the sketch.

As far as the color and shading goes, it's really bad, the color scheme is very random and ugly, the shading is no where near to cell shading, or normal shading for that matter.

I suggest practicing sketching before you move on to shading and coloring.
Aka jusmi.
ok thank you
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can you provide an example of what you mean so i can better understand
Last edited by SoulNeku; Aug 15, 2012 at 09:48 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
You don't need an example. Practice coming up with your own sketches. Look at tutorials, and whatnot. There are tons of them on the internet. The colors would have looked better if they were more natural too, light tones of reds, browns, yellows, etc. Green hair and a purple shirt is extremely ugly.

http://www.youtube.com/user/idrawgirls

This guy has good tutorials, watch some of them then practice what you've learned.
Aka jusmi.