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Trying to improve. CnC needed
Nothing real flashy about this one.

I just tried to work on my control.
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zebra hoof.rpl (88.9 KB, 43 views)
Bump!
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Another replay I whipped up for fun.

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split the atom.rpl (109.7 KB, 33 views)
Last edited by Lucid; Sep 2, 2012 at 06:25 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
zebra hoof was good in decap but if you maybe make your leg more down you would decap and cut his arms

and split the atom the kick maybe good but you would cut his legs but you didn't

and i once loved you is good if its decap only but if you want to continue in last you would extend your right knee with left knee you would cut his chest or legs and decap in same time
Want set? head? avvy? pm me if you want anything.
Thanks for the comments on all my replays.

I'll work on editing them for more dismemberment's now.
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I'm pretty happy with the hits in this replay.
The ending is pretty stiff though. :c
CnC?
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1-2.rpl (87.6 KB, 30 views)
Last edited by Lucid; Sep 3, 2012 at 09:27 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
The pose was not stable, you cant edit that into a madman, and the pose was not balenced, and all of your opener are nothing special, try changing the engage distane to around 200 so you have room to get momentum.

5.5/10
On 1-2 I rather liked how you didn't go out of your way to dismember more. The way you did it looked like you weren't trying for much, and the opener doesn't really seem to matter other than what you do after it. Only thing I can really complain about is how Termic ran on with his post, and saying you can't edit it into a madman. Keep doing what you do best Lucid.
Wow, I really appreciate your more personal CnC , in that comment.

I am working on a few replays now. Hopefully posting some tonight.

Do you have a replay thread going?
Hey guys.
Here's a new WIP split-cap.
Was trying to work on my aiming in this replay.
CnC please. C:
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Bumping with a (weird) replay I made today.

Please don't take it seriously, it is meant to look goofy.
Hope you enjoy. C:
Attached Files
Split Cap.rpl (104.4 KB, 16 views)
Cocaine.rpl (171.3 KB, 12 views)
Last edited by Lucid; Sep 19, 2012 at 03:55 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump