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Klux's Replay Thread
I am a beginner at replay making so please cnc my replays so I can improve.
All cnc is welcome - no matter how harsh. I'll start with this one.
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Klux - Infinity.rpl (60.8 KB, 19 views)
I believe you can get more dms with that first kick, it's rather powerful.
The elbow knee was okay, but I'm sure you can lay a kick on Uke's chest and continue the replay.

Far superior to the other ones still.

I have a replay thread
Last edited by pusga; Sep 7, 2012 at 09:15 PM.
oh yeah
Well, a simple opener.
The first kick was okay but can be more destructive and powerful.
The next kick wasn't okay, you can just kick uke wirth yiour foot, noot knee.
Your movement was sometimes stiff.
and pose?
"People become stronger cause there are memories they won't forget."
You still need more style and aiming. I see that you have improved but you still have a long way to go. First of all, aim your hits better. If you didn't accomplish the kick you want, edit it and edit and edit and edit until you get the hit you want. Second of all you need to know what joint does what better. Also you need to get more familiar with holding and relaxing. And finally you need to make your movements more smooth and organized instead of twitchy and random.
Thats about it, just keep on working.

And why did you use your alt? lol


*Requesting CnC
Thanks guys. This helps a lot.
I'll cnc your replays.


EDIT: Cham, my main is banned.
Last edited by Klux; Sep 8, 2012 at 04:09 PM.
BUMP.

Cannot cnc replays as my 4.0 doesn't work. Hopefully I'll get it fixed soon so I should be able to watch replays.

Here's a replay I just made:
Attached Files
Klux - Tectonic.rpl (63.0 KB, 6 views)