Looks great, but I see some ghosting.
If you record in around 60 fps, I can let you know the best twixtor settings. I don't think they work the same for 30 fps clips, it might make it worse, idk.
FUCK EFFECTS! I loved this! Like seriously man, effects are shit! You don't need them, some nice calm music, slow down parts, good camera movement, then you got the best video ever. Don't let anybody tell you you need fucking effects (even though the people above didn't say you need them.) Just one of the best videos I have seen in a while <3333