some nice effects, could look very pretty but lacks some of the basics.
and the text isnt completely horrible, which is really good. lol
layout and planning is meh though, picking up on what culapou mentioned, tori at an angle, horizontal sig, round effects, etcetc.
blending is overdone, struggled to make out the pose of the tori.
flow is also confusing, same thing as my comment on the layout.