Short preview of an old track I am still making
Any ideas on adding a shitload of stuff, appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/oxizer/orfeas-reys-wip

At first, the kick sound like someone is punching a jar.

The part 0.07 to 0.27 sound kind of nice. The "drop" at 0.27 also sound nice. But try to build up the music before the drop so yuo really can feel the drop.

Thanks, I'll try changin the bassline to see how that goes.

I like this but i think the drop was kinda to fast it seems like you rushed that drop.
I like the begging but it sounds weird Good job i like this =]

Thanks man, much appreciated.