Toribash
Original Post
[Vid] Toribash - Bonfire! (my first video)
Hello everyone, I would like to share with my first Toribash edit.



Staring Ryoukoo, who is a awesome replay maker. ;)
Please CnC, as I would like to improve and make more videos.
Last edited by Wulfi; Dec 14, 2012 at 01:15 PM.
The juiciest Wolf in town.
wulfi.on.toribash.com
Originally Posted by TORIITO View Post

Done
Also: great vid bro.. but use keyframe..

Thanks man, any other CnC?
The juiciest Wolf in town.
wulfi.on.toribash.com
the editor hand is strong with this one
Very good for a beginner
You started nicely , and you achieved a not-bad snyc
welcome to toribash
I'll hope you will get better and better
good luck in the future
-V
anyways ,this videos score is 6.5/10
See my mug , it'll probably turn the flowers black
Originally Posted by 1TheV View Post
the editor hand is strong with this one
Very good for a beginner
You started nicely , and you achieved a not-bad snyc
welcome to toribash
I'll hope you will get better and better
good luck in the future
-V
anyways ,this videos score is 6.5/10

Thanks! I really appreciate this guys. ;)
The juiciest Wolf in town.
wulfi.on.toribash.com
Very unique style of video making. The intro/logo was a bit too long or if you want it ti be
long set some background clip or something to make it more interesting (just a suggestion).
To remove the [game] button just press "esc" two times. (in case you don't already know that)
TORIITO has a point, use a little more camera movement. The sync was good and
I liked the video. Hope to see more from you.
~I make videos and stuff~
x_O
^Please give constructive criticism next time, it'll help him out alot.

And i quite like the video, only things i can say is that the intro was too long, to some i guess it wouldn't mind, and there you need more camera movement, as the guys said up there. One more thing is that i can see the cursor on the screen, try keyframing, then move the mouse off to the side before you start recording.

Other then that it was a cool video. Way better then my first vid. 7/10

I hope you become a really good toribash video maker in the future, Good luck man.
Originally Posted by Dobby View Post
^Please give constructive criticism next time, it'll help him out alot.

And i quite like the video, only things i can say is that the intro was too long, to some i guess it wouldn't mind, and there you need more camera movement, as the guys said up there. One more thing is that i can see the cursor on the screen, try keyframing, then move the mouse off to the side before you start recording.

Other then that it was a cool video. Way better then my first vid. 7/10

I hope you become a really good toribash video maker in the future, Good luck man.

Thanks so much! But, what's keyframing? :/
The juiciest Wolf in town.
wulfi.on.toribash.com
what's keyframing? :/

Its when you press K while in a replay to save a keyframe for the spot where the camera
should be. (camera movement in toribash)
~I make videos and stuff~
x_O
Originally Posted by machker94 View Post
Its when you press K while in a replay to save a keyframe for the spot where the camera
should be. (camera movement in toribash)

Ah, thank you.
The juiciest Wolf in town.
wulfi.on.toribash.com