BR41ND4NC3 - What you need to work on is your openers, be creative with them, make them stylish so they flow well with the replay, so that's one thing you can work on, the twist into the kick was great, flowed very well and the kick itself was stylish but with more aim and better timing, you can definitely get a better hit in there. Another thing is posing, you wouldn't want to have a good replay but end it with no pose. This pose was quite generic so work on that and try not be so stiff, overall 6/10.
Keep 'em coming!