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[Tex]Innocent girl
a new anime head,
I am completing in days.

The start is this:

preview


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Last edited by dengue; Mar 4, 2013 at 02:16 PM.
This is pretty damn good, however the eyes are a bit too far apart. :c
We're all going to Hell, we may as well go out in style
Death is a promise, and your life is a fucking lie
Eyes are still a bit off, this qualifies as "quality anime". They're also a little bit too big, but I think that's more of a opinion matter. Mouth is fine, don't like the nose though, something about the shape and shadow that looks wrong, tried a different type? ^^
Ears are a little bit too big and choppy, if you know what I mean...

Good job, I like your work.

Fenris:
The space between the eyes is one eye,
it is a bit less than one eye, because the eyes need to be on the center.
I got a reference.
The eyes are good, in a small head I just want it to be big.
It is innocent look for a girl.
she looks horribly disproportioned
anime or not, it looks bad.

the eyes are just too far apart and too big.
the angle and low positioning of the eyes just exagerates it, making her look positively disfigured.

looks like someones removed her eyes and stuck them on the side of her head like a fish that doesnt know which direction to look.
I mean really, her ears are pretty much attached to her eyelashes...

I dont like it.
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
BenDover: the distortion makes it.
I will try to correct the wide tilt eye in the sketch phase.
About the eyelashes, I need to make eyes smaller.
thanks

Edit:
I flipped eyes a little and made it smaller and less wide.
That is still innocent look.

first post updated.
Last edited by dengue; Mar 4, 2013 at 02:15 PM.