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Tinny's Sp Replays
Hey, here i'm going to post some of my replays. constructive criticism is very appreciated.


Check out my most resent replays!!!
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Head Kick #4.rpl (153.3 KB, 31 views)
Last edited by Tinny; Apr 15, 2013 at 06:16 PM.
overall, your headkick is awesome 9/10
but In my opinion, your starter was kind of a let down.
POOP
do you like it?
Okay Thanks. i know what you mean.
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Here is another replay. This one is a madman that a made a while back and just put some final touches on.
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A Prayer Of Forgiveness .rpl (164.0 KB, 16 views)
Last edited by Tinny; Mar 14, 2013 at 11:39 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Here are a couple more replays. Feel free to comment and criticize. I'm trying to get better so your help is appreciated.
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Taking A Head.rpl (123.3 KB, 15 views)
Madman.rpl (198.9 KB, 15 views)
Split and Decap.rpl (140.0 KB, 14 views)
taking a head:
The jump was nice but the kicks lacked power.
Try and aim for more crucial blocks of joints, and when kicking, don't hit the top of the head, it looks sloppy and loses all your leg's momentum.

madman:
The initial jump was again very nice, decap lacked power though.
The split was very nice, but again lacked momentum.
The rest kinda looked sloppy, like an add-on, kinda like you did it jsut to get some more dm's.
Dm's don't make a good replay, you could leave that as a nice split cap with a pose.

Split and Decap:
Punches from those angles rarely work, try and get some long sweeps going. Close quarter replays are fun, but when you want to do punches, you often need more room for a setup.

Overall, the replays show potential, just work on getting some real power and aim behind your hits and you should improve drastically o7

sorry it took me so long to comment
She/They

Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
Thanks for all your tips Erth. I will work on my replays some more.
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Ive been working on my replays. and taking Erth's pointers into consideration and here are a couple of more replays.
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Split.rpl (85.1 KB, 11 views)
Head Kick #4.rpl (109.4 KB, 10 views)
Last edited by Tinny; Mar 24, 2013 at 07:20 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Realism is beautiful
Ezylryb: I tried to put a punch in there, but because i have the gravity at -30 i just don't have enough time to. But i did use the momentum to do a little spin trick thing. Check it out!
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I was fooling around and got this, a little funny, but i thought it was cool.
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Split Spin.rpl (159.5 KB, 13 views)
Throw split.rpl (90.3 KB, 10 views)
Last edited by Tinny; Mar 28, 2013 at 06:58 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Realism is beautiful
You grab yourself with the hand you want to rip off. Like on the peck or on the arm.
(Contracting the wrist sometimes helps)
Just look at the replay and you should figure it out.
Its pretty simple when you get used to it.
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Hey, here are a couple tricking replays i made.
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Trickery!.rpl (87.3 KB, 5 views)
Trickin!.rpl (166.3 KB, 5 views)
Last edited by Tinny; Apr 15, 2013 at 06:17 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Realism is beautiful