This is it

Well, you need to relax more joints. Your wayyy too stiff (That's what she said XD)
Try to stay on you feet a little more. For your first spar you did pretty good. So take my advice, i'm sure you'll improve

Assuming your not lying to us that this is your first spar good job. Again you need to stay on your feet a little more for realism.

thanks for advice , ill keep it in mind!

For the first spar you did okay

You were pretty unrealistic and messy

I think you were on your hands to much and in to many weird positions

First spar to me would be

5/10


But if it wasnt I would vote 3/10

Unrealistic, you jumped from side to side a lot like you where jittery. Stay on your feet and try not to hit things too hard that makes for a really unrealistic spar. Otherwise its pretty fine.