Toribash
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[Vid] chamara - 3CE


Made this for my bby chamara, great replaymaker.
Check out his replay thread here.

Note:
This is my first video, really want some thoughts on how I can improve.
Information:
I used Sony Vegas.
I used Twixtor plugin.
Link to song

PM me if you want a video and what not, I'll only make it for people I know and good replaymakers.
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Thanks alot bud, I love it.
Especially the simple style and transitions are really nice.
Looking forward for more ;)
[3:14:07 PM] Slykuiper: aaa
[3:14:09 PM] Slykuiper: overused song
[3:14:45 PM] Slykuiper: intro/outtro too long
[3:15:01 PM] Slykuiper: sync was good
[3:15:08 PM] Slykuiper: Camera movements were a bit too jaggy for me
[3:15:17 PM] Slykuiper: (I'm being harsh so you improve on those things)
[3:15:20 PM] Slykuiper: it wasn't really that bad
[3:15:30 PM] Slykuiper: but those are some things to improve on i guess
[3:15:33 PM] Slykuiper: Editing software?
[3:15:38 PM] ZeToxiik: requested song
didn't want to cut the song :x
[3:15:40 PM] ZeToxiik: thanks tho<3
[3:15:43 PM] ZeToxiik: I used sony vegas
[3:15:47 PM] Slykuiper: get magic bullet looks
[3:15:52 PM] Slykuiper: I think that's for sony vegas too

thoughts
Not sure when you used twixtor, but if you're trying to use it in it's real purpose I suggest recording in a higher fps. Since sony vegas has a limit as to how fast you can speed things up, recording only the sections where you want to twixtor in a high fps (60 fps IN toribash too). If you decide to use magic bullet looks, humper gave me this sweetass color correction pack he made, and I could send it to you if you need. Just be sure to use CC that matches the shader you use.
I genuinely like this, there aren't any stupid overlays everybody likes to use, it's simple, and reminds me a lot of the older toribash videos that I really like (ahem, boragoom/vate)
gjbuttmasterbby
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

You definitely needed some color correction in there, and get rid of the big black bars at the top and bottom. As Slycooper said, the intro and outro were too long, and use magic bullet for color correction, and yes, it is for Vegas Pro. Nice job for a first vid though.
The part of the video that was actually a video was nice, but the picture at the beginning and end bored me. Good job though!

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