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~1.5 hors (2)

the first one is overall pretty impressive although i wouldn't mind some nipples added on there
the highlights on the legs and side are splendid
the facial anatomy is wonderfully accurate
great style for the hair
cracks on the ground are a nice touch
my only complaint is the horns (shape and shading)

Thanks Vark, if I hadn't seen your name in here I wouldn't have taken a looksy.

I'll CnC the first one.

First of all, what a wonderful expression!
I applaud you, you did a really great job on that.
The concept is nice, without the title I would've said it's a Succubus no doubt.
However, there's always a point of improvement.
For this piece it's that it just does not look finished.
If you'd define the lines some more, clean the piece up a bit, you'd have such a beautiful work of art!
It does not need a lot of work other than that and a fixing of the horns.
It's up to you, really. But right now it still looks like a rough quickie.

I hope you will "finish" the piece, it would look great in your portfolio.

yeah i'd have to agree with the "not quite finished" feel although it may just be the style

I like the rough looks on pieces, When I was still painting, I was always happier with the earlier versions than I was with the final one.

Been watching your progress on deviantart, your pieces are gradually getting more complex and your use of colour has been getting better and better

@Bend:
If you refer to sketch VS unfinished, I agree.
Sketches usually look awesome because they're rough and complex.

Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with a "rough" look, especially if you use it to create depth.
But I'm positive that this piece will increase quite a bit when "cleaned up".
In this piece it's also because areas like the face look more defined than let's say the stomach.
And that's not a matter of depth as they're at the same point of depth.

Damn, I wish I had no obligations.

I find it difficult to express themselves in English, but I would like to say a big thank you to everyone for the feedback!
You're right, she not finished. I completed yet it later, but now I have no strength.
Horn... problem areas. I will correct
I do not know what to say about uncleanness, but I love this style.
I like the sketch version of the image, and I try not to do the flattest places in the picture.
body and face are finished. But his feet, background, hair horns I will correct. And the color.
Thanks again for your feedback ... :3