Sorry if this comes out a bit rude, (not trying to be rude Dx) but i dont think a lot of people can give you advice before you've learned a bit more stuffz. i may be wrong, though. >.> im js.
Edit: unless you're not really looking for help on your replayslol. but i shall gladly subscribe to this to see your improvement over time v:
Last edited by Ezophlee; Jun 21, 2013 at 06:31 AM.