Endurance Onslaught 6.0
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Whats the best ''POEM'' you could make?
Well, guybashers, and girlbashers, lets see how good you all are at poems and i'll start it off ok!

Everyday I see people fighting, swearing, caring , and sharing. But people always tell you how to live your life. First, you are the special bud on your family tree. When you get older, one day you will spread routes in the family tree, maybe one two or three.
I know I am smart but don't choose to do it, all my teachers are frustrated. I don't like to be hurt inside or outside hated. When I am standing in class,at school, I may look like a fool, but when I look at it, like I am a ghost invisible, almost faded. Sometimes I question myself and say, "Norman be good and don't be mean other or ya brother or sister because I really love her " but I always will love my mom, my sister, and my dad.Waking up in the morning thinking how this day will probably go my way, like each other week, it will probably be sad, or mad. I sometimes look up in the sky, always knowing my great grandma's and grandpa's looking down at me, telling me nicely to do something and let turn it out to lets see. I no friends once, man that probably was a sequence of my life, until somebody tricks you and back stabs you with a cold black knife.My heart is always beating and keeps on repeating, "Never give up on life your just starting" .Now people might think as me as a dumb person, but if actually got a reason or are tease or you a at ease. Please show me respect because I already do it, my soul is trap in a dark bottom bit, yelling at my face to get back up to give it all your might, have the courage as a knight , all my dad says I better fight, I guess I will try all as I might, into this dark cloudy night. Sometimes, my sister is mean, she takes showers everyday, now her new nickname is Mr.Clean.

To be continued ........

P.S ~ I really hope my friends and family in joyed that very much. Also I am sorta sad
Last edited by 30001068; Jul 27, 2013 at 09:13 AM.
For all the lovers out there. You don't know what love is, till you lose it. </3
Walking the dog,
until I know
you and your dog's
yo-yo,
so I have a yo-yo
dog,
so you can increase
your dog,
so you can live
in dogs,
electronic engineering,
the dog.Keep
the dog from
the animal
Experiments
for a new world to find
the dog bildrbrg best,
like pop music.
Why is the dog
dog of the earth,
good dog,
dog, dogs
For dogs,
dogs in the world.
How are you?
I was remembering some stuff that happened in the past year and came up with this shit.

"Perfect" ain't perfect enough to describe you.
Wonderin' if you're worth it enough for me to go flying through
straight up out of my comfort zone just for me to say "hi" to you.
This ain't me, approaching is just something I'm too shy to do.
A wingman just won't do,
I'll have to bring my entire crew,
This right here's the new me,
or maybe the one you made yourself see.
My mom, my dad be telling me I got a whole life ready for livin',
but the life I got right now, it's pumped by you, for you it's driven.
Young people like me got these issues, you see,
but I don't know why it feels like it's just me,
and I don't know why I have the least luck,
I've been lost a couple times but never this stuck.
Only time will tell where I'm gonna race,
hopefully when I look to the side, I'll see your face.
a spoon.
I can change the world
I realize this may be a shock but
Money will make me happy
is a lie, and
Happiness comes from within
So in thirty years I’ll tell my children
They are not the most important thing in my life
My employer will know that
I have my priority straight because
Work
Is more important than
Family
I tell you this
Once upon a time
Families stay together
But this will not be true in my era
This is a quick fix society
Experts tell me
Thirty years from now I will be celebrating the 10th anniversary of my divorce
I do not concede that
I will live in a country of my own making
In the future
Environmental destruction will be the norm
No longer can it be said that
My peers and I care about this earth
It will be evident that
My generation is apathetic and lethargic
It is foolish to presume that
There is hope
And all of this will come true unless we reverse it.
(Read it upside down for the negative version)
Last edited by 4kid; Jul 27, 2013 at 01:52 PM.
Bye bye toribash
That was really cool 4kid. Reading for the last line to the first was inventive.
This is just a story showcasing my lyrical abilities of describing events.

Shady figured shadows
Try and figure out a plan
about an unwanted man
The silhouettes
Smoking cigarettes
Around a round table
Discussing terms
Towards a strike, fatal
The deceptive suppliers
that supply the demand
to the chain of command
Were intercepted by
The Feds in black
But the boss heard word
Of the back stab attacks
From the inside that stacked
Depleting the incoming stacks
And with that
The trucks with drugs
Ducked and laid low
As decoys got busted for
Holding nothing but the fake blow
A warehouse down by
The old docks
Is the first safe zone
For the real stock
4 O'clock in the afternoon
Men ready for the call
Commence the move
Part 2
Unload the goods
Onto boats and ships
And play is off as legit cargo
The cops on patrol
Looking to seize control
Of :Smuggle in The White Gold
But what they don't know
Is that boats lined with the shit
Is yet apart something so big
They couldn't wrap their minds around it
Last edited by T0ribush; Jul 27, 2013 at 07:12 PM.
Originally Posted by 4kid View Post
I can change the world
I realize this may be a shock but
Money will make me happy
is a lie, and
Happiness comes from within
So in thirty years I’ll tell my children
They are not the most important thing in my life
My employer will know that
I have my priority straight because
Work
Is more important than
Family
I tell you this
Once upon a time
Families stay together
But this will not be true in my era
This is a quick fix society
Experts tell me
Thirty years from now I will be celebrating the 10th anniversary of my divorce
I do not concede that
I will live in a country of my own making
In the future
Environmental destruction will be the norm
No longer can it be said that
My peers and I care about this earth
It will be evident that
My generation is apathetic and lethargic
It is foolish to presume that
There is hope
And all of this will come true unless we reverse it.
(Read it upside down for the negative version)

Just saiyen, he didn't make this.
I came here to laugh at you