I don't know, but for some reason the gravity looks lower than -30 for some reason.
Anyways,
The opener could have been better, but it was okay.
Split dm was alright.
I think at around 780, you could have done a lot more.
After that, everything was just random and unnecessary.
Should have fixed the pose too.
Decent replay, but you could do better.
Keep practicing.

I agree with MK. ^

the hits were awkward and the opener was awkward and it was just sort of...awkward. and the transition to the... "pose" was odd and twitchy.

KAPE PRAYCTESSING BREAUGH

mmeeerrr

this one...looked way cooler. but.

the opener looked a bit odd, but it was still followed up by some awesomeness. xT

the decap didn't look very stylish, it was kinda awkward. and then there was that weird air kick after the decap.

also you could've just posed when you got to the ground after the decap. :L

gj though

Since when do trucks count as SUV's

Holy shit that was actually pretty cool.

The opener was the worst part, it was really awkward and stiff.
The dm's, however, were really cool and well-paced. Also you got a lot smoother.
I don't like how you contracted your wrists so much, as it tends to look sloppy and unrealistic, but I really liked the cork/setup thing.

Pretty good job overall, just needs a bit of polishing.

*edit: Just realized this was a collab, idk who did what so it's hard to say what you need to improve on.

by request I will post something I didn't collab on

Super was pretty good. The opener... used too much.
The first dm I thought was pretty neat. During that long moment of stillness in the air, you could have done something better to get to uke.
The following dm's right after were pretty good also.

do I do this or this do I do?